Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it's a bad idea and it could be dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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SUCCESS

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is a term that cannot be defined easily, but nowadays is related to wealth, the more

money

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people have the more successful they are.

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, successful cannot be quantified, and though wealth is a well-known way to measure whether if someone is successful or not, is not accurate.

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essay will discuss why wealth could be considered a method to measure

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success but

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success, but

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show another way that people use to determine when someone is successful. Wealth is one of the most popular ways to measure

success

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, powerful families that are recognised for being the owners of different companies, are well known as successful for the quantity of

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they produce

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of their business, with that

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they travel around the world, buy whatever they want and people want to live that life.

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, those families can have members who have not done anything

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their lives (consume drugs and alcohol) and inherit that

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, so they cannot be considered successful.

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money

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is not enough to determine

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. People with a good education level that don't necessarily earn good

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are considered successful because of the knowledge they have.

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, a friend who has studied a

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master's

degree in psychology, not only was feeling successful because he was learning new topics and increasing his abilities but

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with that learning he was proud of himself because he was changing people´s lives, and doing something for society, reaching his personal satisfaction. Even though

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is something

unmeasurable

impossible to measure

immeasurable

because, for different people that word means different things,

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essay argued why some people are considered successful due to the

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they have, and how other people who don’t necessarily have

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but have reached another objective in life are considered successful too.

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success

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can be measured in different ways and is really hard to quantify it.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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