These days, more and more people travel alone. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
In
this
day and age, there is an increasing number of people
who tend to travel independently and this
phenomenon has both benefits and drawbacks which will be compared and analyzed in this
essay.
To commence with, one
evident benefit to travelling solo is somewhat related to low
budget. Correct article usage
a low
In other words
, it is easier to keep up your allowance when visiting new places independently on the ground that traveller
can decide for themself what to spend money on. Another reason why Fix the agreement mistake
travellers
people
are inclined to travel individually is boosting
their confidence. Being on their road will help them to achieve valuable life skills, Change the verb form
to boost
challenge
their limits and ability to deal with obstacles. Correct word choice
and challenge
As a result
, it turns them into a more confident person. Moreover
, being a solo traveller make
it much easier to interact with the locals. Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
Therefore
, you can embrace more chances to make more friends.
There are some drawbacks of travelling alone that also
need to be taken into account. First and foremost, personal safety could be a serious concern. One
clear evidence is that when people
travel individually, there is no one
to watch their back. For example
, it is much safer for people
to get back to the hotel late at night when travelling with other person
. Another major issue is that you will feel lonely when travelling alone. Change the wording
another person
other people
In other words
, you will not be able to share the moment, for instance
, there you are, stunned by a perfect panorama or a sensational skyline and there is no one
to discuss just how wonderful it is but instead
, you take a few pictures and leave.
In conclusion, although
travelling solo has certain negative effects such
as personal safety concern
and Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
feeling
of loneliness, it has an extremely positive influence on Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
people
Change noun form
people's
budget
and confidenceFix the agreement mistake
budgets
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