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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult,such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write atleast 250 words

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Nowadays, there is an increase in tourist population in harsh weather places like the Sahara or the Antarctic. It is a fact that the taste of different tourist destinations has changed in recent times.
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 most of the people do visit a place because it energises and make their moods relaxed. So, it doesn't matter whether it's a harsh or a calm climate.People who seek for adventures always have an alignment to experience hard times for their vacation. It can make their journey a lifetime experience and worth memorable moment. They can cherish each moment of their vacation since they undergo very tough and challenging times.
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, there is an expedition tour in Norway
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where adventure seekers are selected by Norwegian government which is selected from different countries.They are mixed together and go for expedition for almost 50 days in the harsh climate of Norway in -50 degree Celsius. On the flip side, being adventurous while travelling can even be a danger to human life.It can be life threatening like loss of breath, giddiness due to altitude changes
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 rashes in the skin due to sunburn or even stroke due to extreme conditions. Lots of money will be wasted if a tour or related activities are not properly planned or organised well. In conclusion, travelling rejuvenates a person without any doubt, but it can become a hassle if not properly planned or taken care of. Experiencing breath taking sceneries or travelling through the wilderness is always a treasure that has to be hunted which can become a life changing moment at a later stage.

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