In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. It is more preferable in today's job market as without theoretical knowledge tasks cannot be performed in a job

It is sometimes argued that practical skills are considered more important than academic qualifications when it
coms
move toward, travel toward something or somebody or approach something or somebody
comes
cums
come
to getting a job. Some people suggest that job seekers may not need any formal qualifications in the future due to
this
trend.
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Nevertheless
, in my opinion, it is unlikely that academic qualifications will ever become necessary. On the one hand, it cannot be denied that the business market is hungry for skilled employees because
pratical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
skills have a vital
roles
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role
in
success
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the success
of a company. They can bring their experience and other
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
to companies if they have good practical skills.
In contrast
, people who have only studied theoretical
knowledge
probably lack the real skills that are necessary for the workplace. The company can train for
them but
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them, but
this
process will take a lot of time and money.
Therefore
,
instead
of hiring inexperienced, they will prefer to people with good
skils
an ability that has been acquired by training
skills
schools
to reduce training time.
On the other hand
, I think academic qualifications are really
sinificant
important in effect or meaning
significant
.
For example
, a student graduating from university with the highest level of
qualificantions but
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qualifications, but
qualifications but
qualification but
limited
pratical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
skills, still has a great deal to learn. If they have a good
knowledge
, they will reduce time for training and quickly to gain good kills.
In other words
, any person who
aspire
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aspires
to become
lawyer
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a lawyer
or doctor must have
expertical
knowledge
which
require
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requires
higher education.
Therefore
, bachelor or master degree holders are much more welcome by employers. In conclusion, they have to
balence
a state of equilibrium
balance
both practical skills and theoretical
knowledge
. That's really necessary for getting a good job.
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