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n English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Offer to find a place for him / her to live. 2. Give advice about how to find a part time job. 3. Give information on where they can learn your language.

#n #friend #study #town #year #information #advice #offer #place #part #time #job #language
Dear Ayesha, I'm glad that you're coming to Pakistan
next
 year. I think it would be great if you stayed with me and my family who are excited to meet you.
Otherwise
, if you prefer to stay in Hotel,
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i'll
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 book you a reasonable room where you can be more independent. There are lots of jobs in Pakistan of your choice. You can find
job
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newspaper
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.
Therefore
, there are numerous jobs
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 IT.
Moreover
, there are a lot of websites
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 help to find
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job
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 according to your specifications.
Hence
, you can easily find
job
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 here.
Also
, you could easily manage your studies along with your
job
.
Furthermore
, for
language
purpose
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, you don't need to worry about it. There are many
language
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 taught
Urdu
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language
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foreigners. But
i
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 would like you to learn
Urdu
 from my Aunt. She is
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Urdu
 teacher and worked
in
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 Punjab University,
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teach
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Urdu
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foreigners. Please let me know exactly when you're coming so that I can meet you at the airport. It'll be great to see you again. Regards, Sarah

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