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20. Disruptive school students have negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separate. Do you agree and disagree with this statement.

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Each student is a unique individual in the university. Some students are born with special gifts with high-fu
nction cognition;
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function, cognition
others may be less lucky and tend to be naughty at school.
Therefore
, some people advocate that naughty students should be taught in different classes. I agree with their suggestion.
This
 essay will present my reasons for
this
 view.
To begin
 with, separating naughty students in different classes will enhance better education outcome for all students. Hyperactive and insubordinate students will draw teachers' attention in classes and distract other students' concentration as well. If teachers spent too much time in correcting their behaviours, the quality and quantity of teaching will be diminished. 
This
 is unfair to good students who are eager to learn.
Moreover
, naughty students may become negative role models to ordinary students. 
In addition
, teaching naughty students in different classes by more experienced teachers will help them to adapt themselves for their studies.
Furthermore
, it is easy for teachers to approach them by using different teaching strategies rather than traditional ones.
For example
, teachers will be able to pay more attention to
teach t
Suggestion
to teaching
hem how to be patient and how to follow the rules which ordinary students already master. Teaching naughty students separately doe not co
vey a
make known; pass on, of information
convey
 message that they are ignored rather than that they are in good care by
t
Suggestion
of
heir teachers. In conclusion, teaching naughty students is
a
Suggestion
are
 challenge to
m
Suggestion
for
any teachers.
Therefore
, teaching them in a different cl
asses a
Suggestion
class
nd teaching them with different methods will result in better education outcome.
This
 will help them to prepare for their future academic study and careers.
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