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some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable, to what extant do you agree or disagree?

#people #hobbies
Hobby are a necessary need for everyone, some group of people thinks that hectic recreational activities are more exhilarating and
needs
Suggestion
is needed
 for your body.
However
, I do not agree with
this
 idea, these activities depend on personality of
person
Suggestion
the person
people
 to what they do in their free time as a hobby. Pastime activities have different meaning for individuals, some people prefer to sit at home and watch movies, but others like to have more exciting hobbies and they say that it is crucial for your body to release energy by doing difficult or unparalleled hobbies. But we should mention that introvert people may get nervous want to do these activities and they do not enjoy during that
hobbies
Suggestion
hobby
. So,
this
 idea shows that characters of people
reflect
Suggestion
reflects
 their type of recreational activities.
In addition
, some of difficult activities do not access easily,
for example
, body jumping is kind of exciting activities and most of them are built out of town. So, it can be hard to go
their
in or at that place
there
 every time you want and most of these games are not affordable to play every time you want.
Also
 a few problematic hobbies need three or more people
to do
Suggestion
do
, and it makes it difficult to find people as your same taste.
in
Suggestion
In
 my point of view, personalities of individuals show their taste of pastime activities so choosing the difficult hobbies do not work for everyone,
also
 access to these hobbies and cost of them are as hard as finding
friend
Suggestion
a friend
friends
 to do them with you.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unique challenge
  • personal growth
  • mastery
  • accomplishment
  • demanding
  • thrill of achievement
  • pastimes
  • fostering
  • sense of community
  • mindfulness
  • stress relief
  • mental break
  • daily stressors
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