Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking human jobs. Some people believe that eventually all work will be done by robots while others believe that there will be a limit to the tasks that robots can perform. Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you choose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experience, observation and reading.

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In recent years, amazing breakthroughs in the sphere of Information Technology (IT) have enabled

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as assembling cars etc., fairly quickly. Whereas some commentators are of the opinion that computers would replace humans in the near future, others fervently believe that there is no replacement for human-intelligence.

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in the days to come. On the one

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, robots, which are equipped with artificial intelligence, are accomplishing most of the tough tasks.

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, lifting heavier objects while assembling cars was considered toilsome in the past, but now

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made machines do not exhaust rather they can work at length. If,

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In some countries, the widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home or traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

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