As public safety is of the highest importance, it is often necessary to test new products on animals. It is better for a few animals to suffer from for human life to be placed at risk by untested products. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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All lives are important and to value one over another cannot be justified. While, an argument can be made that humans too are part of the ecosystem which follows the principle of 'Survival of the Fittest', we can easily co-exist with other species without creating
unnescessary
not necessary
unnecessary
threats to their existence. For the past few decades, science as a whole has been surmounting one apex after another. Mankind
has been making
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has made
wonderful strides in research, especially pertaining to cures of diseases and
cosmotology
the practice of beautifying the face and hair and skin
cosmetology
.
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, since enormous values have been placed on human lives, it is a mandate that we ensure that these new-found cures are safe for application or
consumption
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by humans.
This
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is done by subjecting guinea pigs, hamsters, mice and several other animals that even remotely resemble the human genetic sequence
to
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of
numerous iterations of the cures and
ennumerate
specify individually
enumerated
tests before
determing
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determining
determine
determines
the safety and viability of a cure for human
consumption
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. During the course of these tests, we end up slaughtering a large number of animals, testing faulty cures and regimens, all in the name of 'research'.
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, science has made leaps so far ahead in one particular field that it might provide a solution for testing these 'cures' and minimizing loss of any type of life. With the ever growing popularity of 3D printers, scientists and doctors
too
in the direction of
to
have started reaping its benefits in saving lives by printing tissues and small organs. The
aforemntioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
research scientists should
also
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start reaping similar
benfefits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
and try to print target human tissues that can be tested upon before it is deemed fit for
consumption
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or application by both humans and animals. In conclusion, placing more value on human lives and torturing animals in the name of science is unjustified. I disagree to a great extent that live animal testing is the only way to test a product prior to human
consumption
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, and strongly advocate that other avenues of testing
be
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is
explored.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public safety
  • untested products
  • animal welfare
  • moral implications
  • scientific validity
  • alternative methods
  • regulations
  • ethical considerations
  • technological developments
  • public sentiment
  • activism
  • societal values
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