Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is thought by some that having separate schools for male and female students is beneficial,

however

, others consider coeducation is more fruitful for students. I will be discussing both the views before concluding a final preference. On the one hand, having discrete schools for males and females, is considered to be less distracting for the students in

conservative society

Suggestion

a conservative society

conservative societies

. It is often assumed that by studying in separate schools, boys and girls will be more focused on the studies, rather than being attracted towards the opposite

gender

For instance

, Saudia Arabia has separate

schooling

Suggestion

school

systems for each

gender

and is considered to have a decreased rate of sexual assault per year, only 6

such

cases reported in 2019. It makes it clear, why many are proponents of the separate schools for male and female students. Despite

this

, separate schooling can cause

communication gap

Suggestion

a communication gap

between both the genders in practical life owing to negligible interaction in the schools. Contrary to the above, boys and girls studying in a coeducation system are more respectful to the each other. Students develop improved mannerism for the opposite

gender

by studying in the same school and it

also

enhances their confidence.

For instance

, in a recent survey conducted by the National University revealed that 95% of working ladies in Karachi felt

secured

Suggestion

secure

, while interacting with their male colleagues, who had graduated from coeducational school system. To conclude, separate schooling system for boys and girls is considered necessary in the conservative society.

However

, I consider that the improved interaction between boys and girls in a combined school is

neccessary

absolutely essential

necessary

for a prosperous society. I sincerely, hope that the teachers can and will play an important role in supervising and teaching the students, how to be humble and respectful to the opposite

gender

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