change Is it important change ? what are differences generations?

If I start by saying that " there is nothing permanent except
change
.'a lot o
f
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people would find it a cliché. Whereas, it is an obvious fact that life involves constant
change
and transformation. Since Heraclitus, we know that it is not possible to step into the same river twice.Transformation and
change
is contini
ous.
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
Change
is a meaningless unknown that we all desire
but
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desire, but
also
fear. Given the big changes in the world,the pe
o
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ple who are afraid of
change
, our parents and their
time
, I believe it will be a little clearer and more understandable why I'm talking about
change
. Our grandparents lived a more humble life. They grew up in a sincere environment where they spent almost all of their
time
with the their family. In past, p
eopl
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the past
e were more trustfu
l so they
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trustful, so
trusted each other very much. There were stricter rules than in our
time
, but they were
also
firmly committed to the rules. They care more about tradition than we do, and their traditions are more important than ours.They've had harder times like financial troubles, unemployment, family problems etc. Nowadays It's easy to get to something, but that was quite hard back
then
. They're almost far away of technological innovations, but they're happy about it.
Although
they appreciate technological possibilities, they don't adopt it. They believe it lowers communication and respect . They
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hink children are becoming more disrespectful with new opportunities. we beca
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more interested in technology so our communication was weak.They love face-to-face communication, believing it to be sincere. Of course, that thought depends on the individual. I think people are more impatie
nt now be
of great significance or value
important
cause easier access to information than before,it cre
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,
tes impatience.
Therefore
, it is necessary to adapt quickly for
cha
nge
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to
.
Although
change
is known to have its good and bad sides, it is a fact that it takes place in our lives. Person changes, society changes, world changes… ‘There is nothing permanent except
change
.’ There are so many differences between my
generation
and my grandparent’s generations. Today, Life is more comfortable and easier than their
time
for many reason.
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reasons
first
important difference is the
education
. My
generation
's
education
is more different than my grandparent’s
generation
. In the past, almost all people were uneducated.
Also
, the
education
was only for men and they did not allow women to learn. But,
education
is very important now.So nowadays,everyb
o
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,
dy focus on
education
.
Therefore
,
also
women play more ac
tive role in our
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a more active role
society.
Secondly
, technology is more advanced than in the past. Nowadays, my
generation
spends a lot of
time
in front of the computer, or watching TV.
Also
,they s
p
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,
end most of their
time
chatting with their friends on their mobile phones.But, they didn't have
such
opportunities in the past.So, they spend their
time
on work or their familes
,friend
a social unit living together
families
s
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,
.I think ,it is
m
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ore sincere than today’s. In brief, Even though my grandparent’s
generation
and my
generation
has some similarities, generally they are different from each other.
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