Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

Today medical

research

and

treatment

is so costly that often people strongly suggest that we should prevent these diseases from occurring

instead

of treating them after happening. Up to

certain extent

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a certain extent

I agree with the above

view but

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view, but

also

think that we should continue our medical

research

to tackle some new diseases that have no treatments yet.

To begin

with, it is not at all possible to prevent all diseases. Some of the developed countries are still suffering from poverty and often people eat

unhygienic

food so there are more chances of sickness among them. It is almost impossible task for any country to completely prevent these diseases.

As a

result it

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result, it

would be always beneficial to treat them and do some

research

so that we can at least have some valid method and

treatment

for each and every illness. One best example of

this

is recently

happened

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happening

Ebola outbreak in Africa. No one had ever imagined it and it was quickly spread to some of the African countries. If we had proper

research

and

treatment

of

this

disease

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disease, then we

then

we could save thousands of lives. So we should invest our time and money in the medical

research

and treatments to tackle

such

life threatening illnesses. On the other side, we should

also

take necessary steps to prevent these diseases. We all know that, today medical

treatment

cost is so high that even

middle class person

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a middle class person

cannot afford it.

Furthermore

, some diseases progress to other people using various

medium

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mediums

media

and

as a

result it

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result, it

is really hard to stop them. Apart from

this

, by preventing diseases, we can save people from severe experiences of these diseases. One of the best examples of how we can prevent diseases is Polio. By proper, systematic, and well defined plan, now most of the countries of the world become Polio free. Even India and China who are the world’s most populous nations

also

have got success on it. In conclusion, medical

research

on diseases and preventing them to occur, both have equal importance and we should equally focus on both areas to make our lives healthier, livable and enjoyable.