Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

Today medical

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and

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is so costly that often people strongly suggest that we should prevent these diseases from occurring

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of treating them after happening. Up to

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a certain extent

I agree with the above

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view, but

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think that we should continue our medical

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to tackle some new diseases that have no treatments yet.

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with, it is not at all possible to prevent all diseases. Some of the developed countries are still suffering from poverty and often people eat

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food so there are more chances of sickness among them. It is almost impossible task for any country to completely prevent these diseases.

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result, it

would be always beneficial to treat them and do some

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so that we can at least have some valid method and

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for each and every illness. One best example of

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is recently

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Ebola outbreak in Africa. No one had ever imagined it and it was quickly spread to some of the African countries. If we had proper

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and

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of

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disease

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disease, then we

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we could save thousands of lives. So we should invest our time and money in the medical

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and treatments to tackle

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life threatening illnesses. On the other side, we should

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take necessary steps to prevent these diseases. We all know that, today medical

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cost is so high that even

middle class person

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a middle class person

cannot afford it.

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, some diseases progress to other people using various

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mediums

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is really hard to stop them. Apart from

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, by preventing diseases, we can save people from severe experiences of these diseases. One of the best examples of how we can prevent diseases is Polio. By proper, systematic, and well defined plan, now most of the countries of the world become Polio free. Even India and China who are the world’s most populous nations

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have got success on it. In conclusion, medical

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on diseases and preventing them to occur, both have equal importance and we should equally focus on both areas to make our lives healthier, livable and enjoyable.