The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph represents the proportion of the population
aged
Change the form of the verb
age
of
65 between 1940 to 2040. Change preposition
apply
Population
has Add an article
The population
becoming
a major key role as it has covered Wrong verb form
become
their
Change the word
the
age
of 65 and over explained
in three different countries.
The data suggests Add a hyphen
over-explained
the
developed countries like Correct your spelling
that
USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
and Sweden
where they
have Correct pronoun usage
apply
different
Add an article
a different
contribution
from 5% to 9% of the Fix the agreement mistake
contributions
age
people over 65 in 1940. Precautionally
, the group of people getting increased Correct your spelling
Precautionary
10
% and 9% in Change preposition
by 10
population
of Add an article
a population
the population
USA
and Correct article usage
the USA
Sweden
while
Japan
has nearly4% a little upward in the country. Apparently, the USA
and Sweden
becomes
near to 15% and 14% in the period of 1980 to 2000 and Change the verb form
become
Japan
has same
Correct article usage
the same
as
4%. At the Change preposition
at
age
of 2040
there would be a sudden change where Add a comma
,2040
Japan
becomes one of the top
, at the Change to a plural noun
tops
age
of 65 and above increased more than 25%, contrary USA
and Sweden
has having
25% to 23%.
On the whole, the data of the oldest group of people have been availed in Change the verb form
had
Japan
rather than the USA
and Sweden
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