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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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There are
two
 schemes, which show us
two
 different offers for living for students at an Australian university. The
first
 variant is for
two
 people for 350 dollars per week and it includes one studio
room
 with a total area of 24 square meters. There are
two
 beds, couple study desks, and other minimum count of necessary furniture for scholars.
In contrast
 to the
first
 option hereinbefore, the
second
room
 is characterized as single. The total area of
such
room
 is less than the
first
 variant – there
is
Suggestion
are
 only 15 square meters.
This
 type of
displayed
Suggestion
displaying
room
 has the all minimum articles of daily use too. We can summarize the given information and compare these
two
 rooms and their equipment. The
room
 for
two
 people has the much more total area, but that number does not look so good if we divide it into
two
 students – there
is
Suggestion
are
 only 12 square meters for person.
Furthermore
, the
room
 for
two
 students
has the
Accept comma addition
has, the
 more interesting equipment set, as an
example I
Accept comma addition
example, I
 can note additional cupboards (they used as a sort of wall there to divide living areas for
two
 students) and
table
Suggestion
a table
 with chairs.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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