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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Education system and especially school plays a main role in everyone's life. Nowadays the verities of educational institutions have increased
last
 20 years. It is true that some schools are more strict
in
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at
 the same time when other based
also
 on the direction of the edition plenty activities. In my point of view, I agree that the pupils' attraction to amusement and interest can provide positive aspects for a study.  I would like to indicate the example on Kyiv Gymnasium of Oriental languages number 1 my friends' son Vova studies there. 
Firstly
, I want to mention there is a variety of competition and events, which are
relating
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related
 to the subjects.
For example
, there was the competition of writing a fairy tale in the
second
 language, which is in the educational program. Viva took part in it in the Arabic language. He and his classmates were excited and could not
imaging
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
 that they. Another example of entertainment, the excursion to
Japanese Cultural Center
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the Japanese Cultural Center
 was organized on autumn holidays.
In addition
, the exchange program between pupils and teachers has provided at
this
 school
last
 year. Children have an opportunity to feel themselves as
teacher
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teachers
a teacher
. One time Vova’s friend from 1-year higher class holds the lesson of Biology in Vova’s class. The pupils were attractive and until now have been remembering the examples of the topic. As the results indicated
such
 new changeless in study are
perfect realization
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the perfect realization
 of their knowledge in their real life. In conclusion, I would like to write that I appreciate the
necessary
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necessity
 of involving entertainment at school. The value is uniting purples and bringing them motivation for study with fun and happiness, which children need always.

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