Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Enviromental
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Environmental
problems are one of the well known arguable topics among people.
Someones
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Some ones
think that loss of animals and plants are the basic problems others assume that we have more essential problems like weather disasters. Nowadays the loss of plants and animal
species
is increasing day by day.There are a myriad of causes to that.
Firstly
,
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because of
intencive
characterized by a high degree or intensity; often used as a combining form
intensive
farming insects has been
extincted
no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
.Small animals who feed on them have moved elsewhere.So predators
such
as wild cat and owls can not exist without prey
species
. Acid rain has been damaged forests
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,
as a
result many
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result, many
woodland
species
have been
endargened
not precisely limited, determined, or distinguished
undefined
underground
.
Moreover
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,
a dam constructed
at
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on
the river land slow the flow of water.Decrease of salinity in the estuary lead to the disappearance of fish. It should be noted that loss of animal
species
and plants has
crucial effect
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a crucial effect
crucial effects
on
envirement
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the environment
environment
.Plants which are important for dealing with a lot of human
deseases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
disease
and for making medicines.And animals which are essential
for
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in
nature.We have to know that plants are not only
beaties
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the beauties
beauties
beats
bites
of nature and animals are not just creatures which
habitute
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
with us and try to prevent their
disapprance
the act of leaving secretly or without explanation
disappearance
. Certainly there are
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
environmental problems
such
as storms
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,
hurricances
a severe tropical cyclone usually with heavy rains and winds moving a 73-136 knots (12 on the Beaufort scale)
hurricanes
,
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,
tsunamis
,
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,
floodings
,
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,
which cause to not only animals extinction but
also
peoples dying out.Too many cities have been destroyed because of
such
weather disasters.
In addition
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,
as flooding is
frequen the
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frequent he
quantity of nutrients on land and agricultural output decrease. To sum up
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I suppose that there are too many environmental problems and all of them are significant.Everyone in society should be attentive and attempt to force with them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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