In general people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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These days people tend to spend less
time
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interacting with their neighbours as compared to past times.
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essay will discuss busy work schedule as its primary reason and implementing regulation on working hours by government to enhance
relation
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relationships
with
person
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the person
people
a person
living
next
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door. Hectic schedule left people with no
time
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to mingle with other in their neighbourhood. Workers are putting extra hours at
job
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a job
to make ends meet. Most of the middle class has either no or minimum spare
time
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, and they prefer to spend those hours with their family. According to
recent study
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a recent study
recent studies
, average
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spent
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on
employment by an individual has increased to 70% as compared to previous
time
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. In order to provide commoners with more recreational
time
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, government need to apply
cap
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the cap
a cap
on numbers of hours a person can work. With
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implementation, not only an individual will have enough
time
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to gather with their
neighbours but
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neighbours, but
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, with relaxation his
production
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productive
outcome at work will increase. In conclusion, spending extra
time
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at employment leads to less interaction among neighbours these
days but
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days, but
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can be improved through government by merely managing
number
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a number
the number
of employment hours.
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