In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new Railways land for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both the views.

Some countries are investing in fast
medium
of
tr
ansport whereas o
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transport, whereas
ther countries are still struggling for improving the basic
medium
of
transport
this
is nowadays thought- provoking is
sue t
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issues
hat
go
vernment s
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the government
hould spend
money
keeping the large group of people's benefits in their mind.
This
essay
this
enumerates the two suggestions whether
government
should spend on co
nstruction n
Suggestion
constructing
ew railway lines for very fast trains between cities or
money
should be spent on improving existing public
transport
. On the one hand, Some people think that
government
should invest huge
money
on constructing the new Railway lanes for very fast trains between cities
such
as bullet trains, tube trains etc., which are the fast
medium
of
transport
. It
b
Suggestion
It's
ecome necessary for nowadays people, lacking of time, have to travel between cities in the short span of time,
additionally
by increasing the frequency of particular train it can be easier to
transport
more people between the city between the cities. For an instance, People living in Japan, having sh
ortage o
Suggestion
a shortage
f time, have to travel between cities become easier by using bullet train. It can of
ten often b
many times at short intervals
often
e seen in de
veloped c
Suggestion
developing
ountries with having hu
ge density w
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a huge density
ith small area of land,
such
as Japan, South Korea, Hongkong etc.
However
, influx of huge fund in the in
this
modern infrastructure of transports in
subsequently
require more fees, taxes and charges as token or tickets from public to operate, which all genres of people are unable to pay, as well as these so
rt o
Suggestion
sorts
f infrastructure demand abundance of funds which is difficult to procure for developing or underdeveloped countries.
On the other hand
, some people believe that
government
should improve existing public
transport
by spending la
rge amount o
Suggestion
large amounts
a large amount
f
money
on it. They believe that everybody have right to use ba
sic facility o
Suggestion
the basic facility
a basic facility
f
transport
, since they pay taxes to the
government
. Existing public
transport
medium
ar
e g
Suggestion
is
enerally very economical and should be available to
e
Suggestion
in
very part of the country. For an example, in developing countries,
such
as, India, being a diversified country, there are inequality in di
stribution o
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the distribution
f funds so far, public
transport
is concerned. There are pr
ofusion o
Suggestion
a profusion
f places where people unable to find buses to travel between cities .
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.
Conversely
, using an existing
medium
of
transport
, people always get late while moving between places,
in addition
to
this
, it leads to the long traffic congestion as well. To recapitulate
this
essay, it seems that countries which have
small area
Suggestion
a small area
small areas
with high density of people and sufficient fund should invest in fast trains to curtail the major problem with basic
transport
and in traffic congestion
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and traffic congestion
, whereas basic transported is must be ubiquitous

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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