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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new Railways land for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both the views.

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Some countries are investing in fast
medium
 of
tr
ansport whereas o
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transport, whereas
ther countries are still struggling for improving the basic
medium
 of
transport
this
 is nowadays thought- provoking is
sue t
Suggestion
issues
hat
go
vernment s
Suggestion
the government
hould spend
money
 keeping the large group of people's benefits in their mind.
This
 essay
this
 enumerates the two suggestions whether
government
 should spend on co
nstruction n
Suggestion
constructing
ew railway lines for very fast trains between cities or
money
 should be spent on improving existing public
transport
. On the one hand, Some people think that
government
 should invest huge
money
 on constructing the new Railway lanes for very fast trains between cities
such
 as bullet trains, tube trains etc., which are the fast
medium
 of
transport
. It
b
Suggestion
It's
ecome necessary for nowadays people, lacking of time, have to travel between cities in the short span of time,
additionally
 by increasing the frequency of particular train it can be easier to
transport
 more people between the city between the cities. For an instance, People living in Japan, having sh
ortage o
Suggestion
a shortage
f time, have to travel between cities become easier by using bullet train. It can of
ten often b
many times at short intervals
often
e seen in de
veloped c
Suggestion
developing
ountries with having hu
ge density w
Suggestion
a huge density
ith small area of land,
such
 as Japan, South Korea, Hongkong etc.
However
, influx of huge fund in the in
this
 modern infrastructure of transports in
subsequently
 require more fees, taxes and charges as token or tickets from public to operate, which all genres of people are unable to pay, as well as these so
rt o
Suggestion
sorts
f infrastructure demand abundance of funds which is difficult to procure for developing or underdeveloped countries.
On the other hand
, some people believe that
government
 should improve existing public
transport
 by spending la
rge amount o
Suggestion
large amounts
a large amount
f
money
 on it. They believe that everybody have right to use ba
sic facility o
Suggestion
the basic facility
a basic facility
f
transport
, since they pay taxes to the
government
. Existing public
transport
medium
 ar
e g
Suggestion
is
enerally very economical and should be available to
e
Suggestion
in
very part of the country. For an example, in developing countries,
such
 as, India, being a diversified country, there are inequality in di
stribution o
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the distribution
f funds so far, public
transport
 is concerned. There are pr
ofusion o
Suggestion
a profusion
f places where people unable to find buses to travel between cities .
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.
Conversely
, using an existing
medium
 of
transport
, people always get late while moving between places,
in addition
 to
this
, it leads to the long traffic congestion as well. To recapitulate
this
 essay, it seems that countries which have
small area
Suggestion
a small area
small areas
 with high density of people and sufficient fund should invest in fast trains to curtail the major problem with basic
transport
and in traffic congestion
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and traffic congestion
, whereas basic transported is must be ubiquitous

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay โ€“ it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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