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today,most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are young. is it a positive or negative development in your opinion ? to what extent do you support this development?

#people #birth #thirties #development #support
In the salad days of
millenium
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the millennium
millennium
 the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion whether should give
birth
 at thirties or at a younger age.
different
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Different
pople
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 have their distinct mindset.
the
Suggestion
The
 following paragraphs would shed light on both the positive and negative sides before making a final note. To commence with the
first
 notion
,
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,
there are
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
 things to be shared in its favour.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
 and foremost
reason giving
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reason, giving
birth
 at
thirities
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
thirties
arthritis
 makes the parental bond strong,
as a result
 no divorce case arises.
secondly having
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Secondly, having
Secondly having
 a minimum bank balance is important to
upbring
 the children.
shifting
Suggestion
Shifting
 towards the
second
 school of thought if the couple decides to give
birth
 at
younger age
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a younger age
younger ages
 with
improper mindset
Suggestion
an improper mindset
 affects on children
,
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,
hence
 without having a proper view on the responsibilities of children should not agree to give
birth
.
therefore
Suggestion
Therefore
 taking time and giving
birth
 is a positive
devlopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 but should not exceed beyond thirties.
having
Suggestion
Having
 discussed both the views
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to infer that giving
birth
 is a
perosnal
concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
 thing at what age they should give
birth
 it will totally depend upon on the couples.
hammering
Suggestion
Hammering
 the
last
 nail
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 personally feel that giving
birth
 at thirties is a positive development.

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