The two graph show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
The provided two pie charts demonstrate the proportional distribution of
the
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energy
sources, namely oil, natural gas
, coal, and new alternatives in the USA in percentages between 1980s
and 1990s.
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the 1980s
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that oil recommended itself as a basic source of using energy
followed by natural gas
and gas
. Additionally
, the alternative source of energy
namely hydroelectric power
and nuclear power
demonstrated the most dramatic changes. However
, the need for nuclear power
usage doubled noticeably during a decade.
Now, turning to the details, the amount of energy
made by oil was just below half of the total energy
(42%) which dropped by 8% and was the most useful source also
in 1990. On the other hand
, the percentage of energy
gained from natural gas
decreased by 1% in 10 years and it accounted for one quarter
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one-quarter
energy
.
Additionally
, coal and nuclear power
are the two categories of sources which increased their energy
production by 5% in a decade and finished the period at 27% and 10% respectively. Hydroelectric power
, which accounted for only 5% of total energy
production in 1980, remained unchanged over the 10 year
time frame.Add a hyphen
10-year
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