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Many students take part-time jobs while studying in the university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

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Students studying in various universities often take part-time jobs which
is
Suggestion
are
 a necessity rather than a desire. The various pros and cons of
this
 would be explained in the following paragraphs. Advantages of part-time
job
 encourage more students to take up jobs. University graduates can manage
the high
Suggestion
higher
 tuition fees, living expenses by earning some money because there are many students, who come from rural and semi-urban regions, who cannot afford it.
Moreover
, if students get a part-time employment and start earning, it would release the pressure on their families to arrange for the expenses. Another benefit is that the graduates or under-graduates could gain and insight into the
job
market which
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market, which
 would prove to be extremely helpful after the studies.
In addition
, the experience gained from the jobs would
also
 add
weightage
Suggestion
weight
weighting
 to the resume, highlighting the willingness to
work
 under the pressure of studies. While it is useful to
work
 during university
education
, there are
also
few disadvantages
Suggestion
a few disadvantages
. The tertiary
education
 is considered to be quite difficult and one must focus on it without any disturbance, but it is not possible
in-case
enclose in, or as if in, a case
incase
 of working students. Another drawback is that the students might get low scores or evil
fail
Suggestion
to fail
 in one or more
subjects
Suggestion
subject
 due to
work
 and studies pressure, which
inturn
Suggestion
in turn
 causes stress and depression. Many students could not balance between
job
 and studies and
therefore
, shows poor performance in both. Part-time jobs are certainly
useful but
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useful, but
 students must give priority to their
education
 because outstanding performance in academics could open doors for scholarships which would eliminate the need for working while studying. I think, students who wish to
work
 should find a balance between
job
 and academics and should not jeopardize university
education
 for small jobs.

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