The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparison where relevant.
This
line graph and table graph are providing information about the merely
monthly temperature and the Change the word
mere
approximately
rate of Change the adverb
approximate
hours
of sun over a period of twelve months in London
, New York
and Sydney
.
Overall
, it can be seen that in
the temperature in Change preposition
apply
Sydney
was relatively higher at the beginning and end of the period. Furthermore
, London
and New York
experienced an upward trend in the middle of the period.
In January, Sydney
experienced a number of above 25 degrees. From here, it gradually dropped to 15 in July. At
the end, it showed an increase to exactly 25 in December, with 20 more than New Change the preposition
In
York
.
London
started with nearly 10 in January, with approximately 5 less than New York
. New York
exceed the rate of London
in April and reached a peak of nearly 30 in July, with 5 higher than London
. Finally
, both the
states experienced a downward trend to a rate of 10 and 5, they came down to the same number as in January.
The total sunshine was respectively higher in New Correct article usage
apply
York
, with a number of 2535. On
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In
the
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apply
second
place came Sydney
, with 2473 hours
. London
considered
to be with more than Add a missing verb
is considered
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
hours
of sun, with 1180 hours
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