In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

One of the negative consequences of having a lot of fast

food

is

health

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a health problem

problem

which is happening to people in many different countries and It is believed that in order to solve

this

problem

,

government

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the government

should increase the tax on the fast

food

to discourage people.

This

is

although

true to the certain

extent but

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extent, but

I believe that there are some useful solutions that governments can use

instead

. When people are rushing to get to their workplaces, they have limited time to eat breakfast or lunch so having fast

food

is considered to be

the most simplest

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the simplest

way for

this

situation. Health problems are likely to occur with people who eat too much fast

food

and nowadays those people are facing with many different diseases

such

as,

overweighting

, and high-sugary blood

problem

which can affect with their work performances and study. There are many solutions that government should use in order to reduce the number of people suffering from diseases and influence them not to have a lot of fast

food

. They should set up an organization that

do

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does

the survey about fast

food

’s main

consumers

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consumers, then

then

government

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the government

should do the campaign to encourage

this

group of people to eat more clean

food

by providing some healthy lifestyle clubs, advisors or shops in different areas to give people suggestions and encourage people to take care of their body.

Second

, governments should improve the educational system for younger generations. They should add the drawbacks of having unhealthy

food

such

as fast

food

in the lesson and school teachers should teach the

students to aware of

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students aware of

health problems and seriously raise awareness regarding how dangerous of having too much fast

food

can be. The students should know some of fast

food

ingredients and how each and every kind of that can create negative impact to their body. In conclusion, I somewhat agree with

this

statement

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statement, although I

although

I believe that eating so much fast

food

will led

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will lead

to

health

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a health problem

health problems

problem

but there are some more useful measures that governments can use as a remedy

to

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for

it than just increasing fast

food

tax which are doing clean

food

campaigns, and educating young people to realize the negative effects of eating unhealthy

food

.