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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in the number and variety of online courses available to adults. This has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, however, other students see these courses as less effective than classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?

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Knowledge is an ultimate power
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 we can get from any source. The popular sources of getting knowledge today are by online and
classroom
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course
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. The online
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 demand has increased a lot in recent days. I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online
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 versus offline courses in following paragraph. In todays modern era, everyone has a mobile phone with internet connectivity in his hand. Every need is available on your finger click and education is
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 not escaped from it. There are several websites and applications available
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today, which
offeres
make available or accessible, provide or furnish
offers
 various courses online. People prefer to learn online
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from
, they can learn it anytime
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 anywhere according to
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one's
 convenience.
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,
 you can get
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variety, of
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course available
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course, available
online so, you
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online, so you
 can choose the appropriate
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 according to your need.
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, the online
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 is not as effective as
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 training. The online
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 is not much interactive. The speaker does not catch the reaction of
listners
someone who listens attentively
listeners
 in online
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course so
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course, so
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 it is kind of one way communication. Whereas
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 in
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 training speaker and
listner
someone who listens attentively
listener
 are face to face so it become more effective. In
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 training you can ask questions and that will be addressed immediately. You can build persona relation with the teacher or other students of the class which will bring together the group of
peoplr
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 having
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an interest
interest
interests
interested
 in one
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unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
 subject or stream. You can share your thoughts with each other which gives you
broader prespective
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a broader perspective
broader perspective
the broader perspective
broader prospective
broader perspectives
 of
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a particular subject
particular subject
particular subjects
the particular subject
. In
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 training, you are
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bound
 to a timeline by which the
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 start and end. In conclusion, online courses are good but not that effective.
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 always better when you have an option to choose from either of these.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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