Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a heated debate about whether extinct

animals

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should be preserved by governments and individuals or not. A section of

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society believes that human

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are beneficial

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from conserving them,

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others argue that governments should

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more attention

on

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human

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ourselves

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. From my perspective, conserving endangered

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is

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beings’

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responsibilities

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. Admittedly, it is a waste of resources to prevent

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from extinction for those countries who are still struggling with making their lives. Especially

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developing countries and the third world, people are not living the basic

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of standard lives and will confront

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huge challenges of making their own lives if the limited resources of countries are allocated to protecting endangered

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. With that said, it is essential to preserve animal species that are in the phase of extinction since their existences bring abundant benefits to human

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.

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with, biodiversity is one of the most imperative properties that human possesses. To be more specific,

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inspired

from

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animals

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invents

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a variety of inventions,

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as

aeroplane

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aeroplanes

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invented from the observation of birds, and radar, working with the

principle

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that are

same

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bat’s

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.

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disappearance of one animal species may cause a chain reaction. To put it another way, the economic system is composed of a variety of

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, and

extinction

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the extinction

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of one

specie

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species

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may cause the disappearance of others.

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, protecting

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is vital for human

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. In conclusion,

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the huge financial cost of conserving endangered

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is not what every country can afford, preventing

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from disappearing is greatly significant.