Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?

In
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During
these days’
technology
increases day by day people cannot assume a life without
technology
. If we take example of
technology
in daily work it makes life easier as compared to old age. I completely disagree with those people who think machines makes them more difficult
Initially
,
computer
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the computer
a computer
makes easier for accounts
now we
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now, we
can store
bunch
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bunches
of information. It makes quite easy to handle different type of account and get various types of calculation.
Secondly
, if we take
example
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an example
the example
of
restaurant
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the restaurant
, now easier to wash dishes in dishwasher in less time even without need more labour. It reduces the cost of owner to hire more people for one job. Every kind of modern
technology
reduces lot of stress from people’s head like washing machine clean our clothes very easy, printer prints thousands of papers in
few minutes
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a few minutes
as that there are so many examples of modern
technology
those reduces
efforts
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the efforts
. In my experience I am working freelancer job from
home which
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home, which
is very comfortable for me even if I want to attend
meeting
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a meeting
meetings
the meeting
, I can attend in online conference Now I am doing job in my comfort zone.
On the other hand
, we all
are depend
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depend
are depending
have depended
on modern
technology
Now companies have to hire hackers to secure their information so that cannot steal or destroy by someone. Security breach is a
higher
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high
stress for business in these days. Apart from that more
technology
leading to unemployment as humans replacing by machines rapidly. To sum-up, we cannot deny that
technology
makes our life better and less stressful. In
digital era
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the digital era
we cannot go far away from
technology we
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technology, we
should learn how to use it and make technologies friendlier.

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