In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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The world population
have been suffering
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has been suffering
has suffered
from many problems which cause lots of diseases and death for centuries. As people have had a lack of providing food, the branch of agriculture have been doing plenty of improvements.
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,
although
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advances can be seen, humans are still hungry. In
this
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essay, the
motivs
the psychological feature that arouses an organism to action toward a desired goal; the reason for the action; that which gives purpose and direction to behavior
motives
motifs
natives
will be explored and actions which can be done about
this
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problem will be presented.
First
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and foremost, History shows that in the past farmers were the most respected people, who had a multitude of facilities to do, among public.
However
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, as time passes individual became to be used to disrespecting people who work with the land. As customers do not estimate the value of labour which is done by farmer, they do not give their entire
live
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life
lives
to the soil. A solution is for government to restore ample respect and value of farmers.
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, advances are only being made for methods which increase people's knowledge. No one pays
attentiom
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attention
to the position of
soil whether
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soil, whether
it is worthy to plant or not. If one only grow a plant in
exact place
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the exact place
and if it is repetitive, ground
also
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gets
tiredness
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tiring
tired
as humans do. Because all
nutrition which
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nutrition, which
are
component
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composed
of soil decrease gradually when it is spent for
growinh
(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growing
one type of seeds.
This
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puzzle is tackled by that people replace the planting location annually as if cotton is reared
this
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year, it will exchange with wheat
next
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year.
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, in
this
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expensive world, price is increasing
unstopppedly
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which people, who is in the norm, are not able to afford to buy. In the same as all things; edible food costs are not inexpensive anymore.
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, a
mojir
of greater importance or stature or rank
major
part of
world population
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the world population
is feeling pain because of hunger. But enigma is addressed by diminishing high prices of goods till that it will become as cheap as everyone has enough fee to purchase it. By the way of a conclusion, life is a test which is full of questions that have not been answered yet. The response given by us evaluate
inwhat
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in what
condition we will live. Personally, I think nothing is impossible. If humanity desires to not be
starve
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starving
anymore
, definitely they have
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, they definitely have
capacity
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the capacity
to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
all solution that are stated above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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