the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant

the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant
The given table illustrates the
number
of native
speakers
of six
languages
and the
number
of
speakers
of these
languages
as an additional
language
.
Overall
, as can be seen, it is noticeable that
Mandarin
Chinese
has the highest
citizens
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number of citizens
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who speak
Mandarin
Chinese
language
.
In addition
, it can divide into three groups which are similar in
number
including
Mandarin
Chinese
and
English
, Hindi and Spanish,
Arabic
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and Arabic
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and Portuguese. The figures for people speaking
Mandarin
Chinese
and
English
are higher than other
languages
, at 1090
million
and 942
million
respectively. It is remarkable that 900
million
of
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apply
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Mandarin
Chinese
use it as a first
language
, compared to 190
million
of
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apply
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people
speak
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who speak
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this
language
as a
second
language
.
By contrast
, the
number
of native people of
English
is only 339
million
,
while
the figure for native
speakers
of
English
as an additional
language
is 603
million
.
Likewise
, the total
number
of
speakers
of Hindi and Spanish
are
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is
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490
million
and 420
million
respectively, when it comes to using these
languages
as a
second
language
the
number
for Hindi (120
million
) is under 2 times higher than that for Spanish.
Also
, native
speakers
of Arabic and Portuguese account for lower proportions, at only 206
million
and 203
million
respectively.
However
, the
number
of Arabic
speakers
as an additional
language
is nearly 2.5 times higher than those of Portuguese as a
second
language
(10
million
).

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