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the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant

the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table illustrates the
number
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 of native
speakers
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 of six
languages
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 and the
number
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 of
speakers
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 of these
languages
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 as an additional
language
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.
Overall
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, as can be seen, it is noticeable that
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 has the highest
citizens
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number of citizens
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 who speak
Mandarin
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Chinese
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language
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.
In addition
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, it can divide into three groups which are similar in
number
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 including
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 and
English
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, Hindi and Spanish,
Arabic
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and Arabic
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 and Portuguese. The figures for people speaking
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 and
English
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 are higher than other
languages
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, at 1090
million
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 and 942
million
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 respectively. It is remarkable that 900
million
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of
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apply
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Mandarin
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Chinese
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 use it as a first
language
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, compared to 190
million
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of
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apply
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people
speak
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who speak
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this
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language
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 as a
second
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language
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.
By contrast
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, the
number
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 of native people of
English
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 is only 339
million
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,
while
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 the figure for native
speakers
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 of
English
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 as an additional
language
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 is 603
million
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.
Likewise
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, the total
number
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 of
speakers
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 of Hindi and Spanish
are
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is
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 490
million
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 and 420
million
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 respectively, when it comes to using these
languages
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 as a
second
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language
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 the
number
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 for Hindi (120
million
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) is under 2 times higher than that for Spanish.
Also
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, native
speakers
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 of Arabic and Portuguese account for lower proportions, at only 206
million
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 and 203
million
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 respectively.
However
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, the
number
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 of Arabic
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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 is nearly 2.5 times higher than those of Portuguese as a
second
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language
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 (10
million
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).

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, speakers, languages, language, mandarin, chinese, english, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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