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recenty published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years . what we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

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The Animal
population
 is a natural beauty of the nature.According to recent research about that the
population
 of
species
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the species
 have been declined by fifty percent in fifty years.
However
, many people believe that the world wildlife
population
 should be protected.I will discuss ways about how to protect the
species
 of animals in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
,
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,
pollution is a major cause of reduce wildlife, so we should protect
their
objective case of they
them
 from the pollution like
water
 pollution is a big problem for the animals
.
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.
Animals drink
water
 from pond, river and
lakes but
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lakes, but
 they do not know about which
water
 is polluted with adding enough chemicals
.
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.
Therefore
, polluted
water
 could be very harmful for them.In
this
 case
,
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,
the government could be
help
Suggestion
helped
 to protect their life and they should make strict rules on polluted
water
.
Secondly
, forest
play
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plays
 significant role in our life and animal's life.But
,
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,
in
this
 era
,
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,
Deforestation is a big problem because people want to use that
places
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place
 for completed their needs.Due to that
,
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,
forest
Suggestion
the forest
 is declining as well as animals.When we do help to protect
species
 of animals so it is
better way
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a better way
 to protect our
population
 of animals in the world.
Furthermore
,
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,
we should not kill the animals for making own goal and record. In the conclusion
,
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,
the animal plays crucial role in the world.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think that we should protect to
species
 of animals because it is the beauty of nature.As well as
,
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,
natural things are always precious for all.

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