The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelian students from 2011 to 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates
the
information about the Correct article usage
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number
of visiting students
between 2011 to 2014 in Paris, London and Rome.
Overview, The highest number
of visiting students
were
in London and the least Correct subject-verb agreement
was
number
of visiting students
was in the
Rome in the Correct article usage
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last
year
.
In the year
2011, there were total
of 10000 visiting Add an article
a total
students
in Paris which was the least at that time. After two years the number
of visiting students
inclined and reached at
20000. In the Change preposition
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year
2014, number
of visiting Change the article
the number
students
decreased and reached to
nearly 17000. The Change preposition
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number
of visiting students
inclined by 50000 from 2011 to 2014.
Further
analysing, The number
of the
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students
was near about 17000 in 2011, then
it decreased by almost 10000 in 2012 and in the year
2013, it was again raised to nearly 17000 and in the next year
it was again reduced.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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