In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as a valuable work experience. discuss both opinions and give your opinion

Engaging children in some kind of paid work is a common practise in many countries. While a good number of people consider

this

to be totally wrong, others view it to be very beneficial. In my opinion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

consider

this

to be less beneficial as it denies the

child

the right to education and exposes them to abuse. On the one hand, children involved in paid works are usually unable to pursue their academic dreams as they spend most of the productive time of the day doing these works. To illustrate, a recent study in Africa showed that a greater percentage of school

drop outs

someone who quits school before graduation

dropouts

are the ones engaged in paid

works

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work

.

Also

, some employees blatantly deny these children access to

school

Accept comma addition

school, thus

thus

impeding on the children's educational rights.

Furthermore

, it exposes

such

children to the risk of abuse as some even live with their employees.

For instance

, a recent occurrence in my

neighborhood

a surrounding or nearby region

neighbourhood

where an employee sexually abuses the little

child

working for him and threatens to kill her on any attempt to reveal it to anyone.

This

grossly affected the

child

's personality in a negative way as she persistently lives in fear and withdrawal.

On the other hand

, children could engage in paid services as a way of rendering financial help to their families. Here, the

child

does

such

works at leisure and the

renumeration

a numbered list

enumeration

ploughed back to the family.

This

consequently

boosts the

child

's self esteem as a feeling of fulfilment in

generated

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generating

when

such

is achieved. To sum up, children engaging in paid work is a common practise recently,

although

this

could yield

finance

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financially

for the family,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe it is completely wrong as

such

children are denied their

educational

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educations

right and exposed to sexual abuse.