In many places,new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the country side.Some people believed it is more important to protect the country side and not build new homes What is your opinion about this.

According to my view
,
Accept space
,
the protection of a
country
is not based on to
built
Suggestion
build
homes that the
country
will be in
protect
utter words of protest
protest
.
Wheras
Suggestion
Whereas
if the
country side
rural regions
countryside
is dangerous and not protect of homes
then
there
is
Suggestion
are
no needs of
building
Suggestion
a building
the building
while if the whole
country
is safe and the homes are protected of
alrms
fear resulting from the awareness of danger
alarm
situation the
consturction
the act of constructing something
construction
is more
neccery
absolutely essential
necessary
.
Accept space
.
Biud
a partially opened flower
Bud
homes
cant
can not
can't
give protection to
coutry
Suggestion
the country
country
. If we look at to the geography of a
country
Suggestion
country, then decides
country then decides
then
decide to
built
Suggestion
build
homes is
the most safe
Suggestion
the safest
the safer
option.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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