The key to solving the environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. Agree/disagree?

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In the past few

years our

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years, our

planet

have suffered

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has suffered

a huge impact of negligence from its own habitants. I agree that the key

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solving

this

problem is for current generations to sacrifice their selfish convenient lifestyle by trying to leave a better place for the new generations and I will explain my statement in

this

essay. In

first place

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the first place

I think we should be

more consiouns

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more conscious

more consciousness

as a consumer by limiting the waste of water,

food and

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food, and

making more biodegradable choices like: having

glass container

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a glass container

instead

of plastic, having a stainless water bottle

instead

of plastic's one.

Therefore I

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Therefore, I

also

think

governement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

should portrait a good example by establishing

law

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laws

a law

that could guide citizens to have more care and respect for the environment. In conclusion living a better place for the future generations is an

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The key to solving the environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. Agree/disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

If people go to live in another country, they should follow the local customs and traditions. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more commonplace than face-to-face meetings. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree?