In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development

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It is considered that, nowadays there are many people investigating thoroughly about it for knowing what they did even if those things that they did were wrong. I

complety

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

believe that it is a positive development due to people like a family could recognize more their own family.

Firstly

, I believe that knowing about your family is

adavantageous

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advantageous

advantageously

due to

this

allows you acquire experiences lived and obtain knowledge

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from

people who have lived more.

Also

, knowing about your family can be so special because you could identify

one

person you haven in common with.

For instance

, countries like China,

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India, Vietnam,

India Vietnam,

Vietnam, India,

India, Vietnam

Vietnam, India

and others

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Asian Countries) do investigations about their ancestors for learning what they have in common with.

That is

why it is

positive development

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a positive development

to recognize and know it and

also

this

can be taken like interesting information for people who are interested in

this

topic.

Secondly

, I believe that the most significant of knowing about

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his

history of

one

's own family is that there were

much

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many

mistakes that they

commited

bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude

committed

However

this

is not

wrong unlike

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wrong, unlike

this

one

way to help someone who does not commit the same mistakes.

On the contrary

this

experience should

encourange

contribute to the progress or growth of

encourage

them to be better and do not make these mistakes.

For example

, some poor areas there are many parents anxious for the study of their

children

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children, although

although

their Grandparents did not do

this but

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this, but

they have knowledge about if

one

person studies, he has more opportunities for achieving his dreams.

That is

why

this

is another good point of knowing about

this

topic. In conclusion, there are many reasons by which families want to know more about their past families, but these are some. It is really significant, knowing about your past family.

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Genealogy
Heritage
Ancestry
Lineage
Descendants
Forebears
Pedigree
Dynasty
Progenitors
Ethnicity
Genetic predisposition
Familial ties
Archival records
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Kinship
Self-identity
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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development

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