In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development
It is considered that, nowadays there are many people investigating thoroughly about it for knowing what they did even if those things that they did were wrong. I
complety
believe that it is a positive development due to people like a family could recognize more their own family.
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
Firstly
, I believe that knowing about your family is adavantageous
due to Suggestion
advantageous
advantageously
this
allows you acquire experiences lived and obtain knowledge by
people who have lived more. Suggestion
from
Also
, knowing about your family can be so special because you could identify one
person you haven in common with. For instance
, countries like China, India Vietnan,
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India, Vietnam,
India Vietnam,
Vietnam, India,
India, Vietnam
Vietnam, India
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Asian Countries) do investigations about their ancestors for learning what they have in common with. Accept space
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That is
why it is positive development
to recognize and know it and Suggestion
a positive development
also
, this
can be taken like interesting information for people who are interested in this
topic.
Secondly
, I believe that the most significant of knowing about he
history of male possessive pronoun
his
one
's own family is that there were much
mistakes that they Suggestion
many
commited
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committed
However
, this
is not wrong unlike
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wrong, unlike
this
is one
way to help someone who does not commit the same mistakes. On the contrary
, this
experience should encourange
them to be better and do not make these mistakes. contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
For example
, some poor areas there are many parents anxious for the study of their children
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children, although
although
their Grandparents did not do this but
they have knowledge about if Accept comma addition
this, but
one
person studies, he has more opportunities for achieving his dreams. That is
why this
is another good point of knowing about this
topic.
In conclusion, there are many reasons by which families want to know more about their past families, but these are some. It is really significant, knowing about your past family.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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