In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development

It is considered that, nowadays there are many people investigating thoroughly about it for knowing what they did even if those things that they did were wrong. I
complety
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
believe that it is a positive development due to people like a family could recognize more their own family.
Firstly
, I believe that knowing about your family is
adavantageous
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advantageous
advantageously
due to
this
allows you acquire experiences lived and obtain knowledge
by
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from
people who have lived more.
Also
, knowing about your family can be so special because you could identify
one
person you haven in common with.
For instance
, countries like China,
India Vietnan,
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India, Vietnam,
India Vietnam,
Vietnam, India,
India, Vietnam
Vietnam, India
and others
(
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Asian Countries) do investigations about their ancestors for learning what they have in common with.
That is
why it is
positive development
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a positive development
to recognize and know it and
also
,
this
can be taken like interesting information for people who are interested in
this
topic.
Secondly
, I believe that the most significant of knowing about
he
male possessive pronoun
his
history of
one
's own family is that there were
much
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many
mistakes that they
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
.
However
,
this
is not
wrong unlike
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wrong, unlike
this
is
one
way to help someone who does not commit the same mistakes.
On the contrary
,
this
experience should
encourange
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
them to be better and do not make these mistakes.
For example
, some poor areas there are many parents anxious for the study of their
children
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children, although
although
their Grandparents did not do
this but
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this, but
they have knowledge about if
one
person studies, he has more opportunities for achieving his dreams.
That is
why
this
is another good point of knowing about
this
topic. In conclusion, there are many reasons by which families want to know more about their past families, but these are some. It is really significant, knowing about your past family.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Genealogy
  • Heritage
  • Ancestry
  • Lineage
  • Descendants
  • Forebears
  • Pedigree
  • Dynasty
  • Progenitors
  • Ethnicity
  • Genetic predisposition
  • Familial ties
  • Archival records
  • Hereditary
  • Kinship
  • Self-identity
  • Patriarchy/Matriarchy
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