Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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According to recent
reserch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researches
, high rate of producing litter is one of the horrible threaten for
environment
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the environment
.
Accept space
.
In today's consuming world, garbage is generated in much more than before. There are
various of possible
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various possible
reasons for
this
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, but steps can be
definitely
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defined
taken to tackle
this
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problem. In my opinion, the main factor is
unware
(sometimes followed by 'of') having or showing knowledge or understanding or realization or perception
aware
of people from the side-effects of producing rubbish. To be more specific, some people know the positive effect of separating different sorts of litter in recycling process
bu
introduces something in contrast or unexpected
but
by
they are uncaring about it.
For instance
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,
last
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year my
city's
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city
council presented a brochure with some recycle bin for separating wet from dry garbage or
recycleable
capable of being used again
recyclable
from
unrescylable
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debris but people have not paid any attention to it. Another
reson
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
is that in
nowaday's
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
hectic world people are
endulging
the act of indulging or gratifying a desire
indulging
single-use products
such
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as dishes or fork and so on that
this
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approach can
leads
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lead
to brutally harm to
environment
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the environment
. I believe that there are several steps that
government
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governments
the government
can do to solve or
atleast
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at least
make dull
this
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issue.
Firstly
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, increase knowledge of society about
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
of producing huge amount of waste.
For example
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, by sparkling
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
or holding various workshops, people would be tempted to control the generation of garbage.
Secondly
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, should enact a strict law about the weight of
demestic
of concern to or concerning the internal affairs of a nation
domestic
litter and who does not obey
this
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rule will be imposed by a high tax
penalties
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penalty
. The
last
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but not least is restricting the producing of expandable goods which are produced by plastic or other
unrecycleable
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materials and superseding them by
recycleable
capable of being used again
recyclable
ones. In
onclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
inclusion
,
although
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there are
range
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a range
of causes of
huge amount
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the huge amount
of producing waste
such
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as
incognizence
a lack of knowledge or recognition
incognizance
of society or
their
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they're
willing to use single-use
suffs
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but government can overcome
to
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with
this
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problem by some simple steps include holding workshops to
knowingness
evidencing the possession of inside information
knowings
of people or constraint the production of goods with
unrecycleable
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raw materials.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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