last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: 1. where and when you lost your bag. 2. what your bag looks like 3. what its contents where

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report my lost

luggage

was left on your flight CX123

last

Wednesday 24 January 2019. The flight flew from London to Vancouver. I discovered that the hand

luggage

had been gone before check out. It was probably I forgot to take it back from the jet. Please kindly help to spot

out

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luggage

. Details of my

luggage

are sated as follows. It is a white and black lady handbag with

zipper

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a zipper

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. The bag has “GUESS” at the front and back. The handbag is spacious with two gold buttons inside. The handbag contained

following

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the following

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items: two packets of tissues, red and pink lipsticks, a foundation, a set of makeup brushes, perfume,

mirror

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a mirror

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, an eyeliner, a packet of eye shadow,

umbrella

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an umbrella

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, cap, sunglasses, a jacket, my son’s car toys, snacks and a watch. Please do not hesitate to contact me by email or phone

[email protected]

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at [email protected]

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/ 8123123 if you have any clues. Thank you for your attention. I am looking forward

for

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your reply. Best regards, Jackie

Sun Feb 09 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

174 words

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