Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report my lost suitcase was left on your flight CX123

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Wednesday 24 January 2019. The flight flew from London to Vancouver. I discovered that the hand luggage had been gone before check out. It was probably I forgot to take it back from the jet. Please kindly help to spot

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my luggage. Details of my lost property are stated as follows. It is a black lady handbag shown “GUESS” at the front and back. It is spacious with two gold buttons inside. The handbag contained the following items: two packets of tissues, red and pink lipsticks, a foundation, a set of makeup brushes, perfume, a mirror, an eyeliner, a packet of eye shadow,

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, cap, sunglasses, a jacket, my son’s car toys, snacks and a watch. Please do not hesitate to contact me by email or phone

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/ 8123123 if you have any clues. Thank you for your attention. I am looking forward

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your reply. Best regards, Jackie 26 January 2019

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

173 words

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