You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear
Mr.
Smith,
I am writing Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter to talk about a series of problems that make impossible
to spend other days of our holidays here.
I am Sahar, who talked to you Correct pronoun usage
it impossible
for
short- term rental Change preposition
about
Change preposition
of you
you
apartment Correct pronoun usage
your
last
week. I visited the advertisement of
your home when I was surfing on Change preposition
for
net
to find suitable accommodation for my family that are coming from Iran to spend their holiday here with me. After I paid the cost of renting by my internet bank account, I took the keys Add an article
the net
of
Change preposition
to
home
from Correct article usage
the home
home
agency.
It is only a week that we have been living here but there are several Add an article
the home
a home
problem
Change to a plural noun
problems
about
Change preposition
with
furniture
. Correct article usage
the furniture
First
and foremost, the furniture is out of Replace the word
outdated
dated
and very messy so that we are disinclined to use them. Correct your spelling
date
Secondly
, the electrician utilities such
as wireless telephone and television are mostly down. The last
but not least, the living room is very dingy. The walls and windows need renovating and painting.
Due to reasons I mentioned above, we are reluctant to stay here for residue
of my family's holiday and we decided to move on more comfortable accommodation, So I want the full refund of the amount paid. Dealing in mind the circumstance I trust you will kindly accept my request.
I am waiting for your response.
Add an article
the residue
your
sincerely,
SaharReplace the word
you're
you are
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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