You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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life

, if we just do the same thing and the same thing forever, absolutely we will get bored one

day

and

that is

why some people prefer changing their habits. Doing something new is the way that may get new interest of

life

However

, some people are just avoiding

change

and just keeping doing same things over. In my perspective, I would prefer changing my

life

everyday as I think

that is

a good way to have a new

day

. Naysayers would debate that changing is not always good as it may lead you to unsuccessful in

life

as you are going the wrong way.

For instance

instead

of just getting back home after school

everyday

Suggestion

every day

and relaxing on the bed, doing some things new may get your interest of

life

Accept comma addition

life, such

such

as playing sports with friends, hanging out or playing around with your neighbour

also

can have a good relaxing after a

tired

Suggestion

tiring

day

in school.

Moreover

, if you keep changing in doing

somethings everyday

Suggestion

some everyday things

some things everyday

somethings every day

, you may know what is best fit for you and what is not.

For example

instead

of just staying at home doing

somethings

an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.

something

same over again, you can go to the court, trying some new sports and thinking what is

the fit best to

Suggestion

the best fit for

the fit best for

you.

Therefore

, you can know how's great

to do

Suggestion

doing

a new thing every single

day

However

, some teenagers nowadays just doing

same things

Suggestion

the same things

over and over again due to laziness and because of that, they may miss out their interests in their lives. They don't like to

change

and avoid in doing

somethings

an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.

something

new, due to that problem, they may become introvert people and anti social.

That is

why changing in doing

somethings

Suggestion

some things

everyday

Suggestion

every day

is so important nowadays. One person can become autism just because he or she doesn't like to

change

in doing

somethings

Suggestion

some things

, he or she

just want

Suggestion

just wants

to do same things over and over again. It will cost him or her a loss.

Nevertheless

, we need to consider that

change

in doing new things in the positive

ways but

Accept comma addition

ways, but

not negative ways and it need to be healthy. In conclusions, doing

somethings

an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.

something

new and changing lifestyle every single

day

is so vital for every single one nowadays. It helps people know what are their reasons for staying a

life

and get

more positive impact

Suggestion

a more positive impact

to one another.

Sun Feb 09 2020

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

391 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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