You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
life
, if we just do the same thing and the same thing forever, absolutely we will get bored one
day
and
that is
why some people prefer changing their habits. Doing something new is the way that may get new interest of
life
.
However
, some people are just avoiding
change
and just keeping doing same things over. In my perspective, I would prefer changing my
life
everyday as I think
that is
a good way to have a new
day
. Naysayers would debate that changing is not always good as it may lead you to unsuccessful in
life
as you are going the wrong way.
For instance
,
instead
of just getting back home after school
everyday
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every day
and relaxing on the bed, doing some things new may get your interest of
life
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life, such
such
as playing sports with friends, hanging out or playing around with your neighbour
also
can have a good relaxing after a
tired
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tiring
day
in school.
Moreover
, if you keep changing in doing
somethings everyday
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some everyday things
some things everyday
somethings every day
, you may know what is best fit for you and what is not.
For example
,
instead
of just staying at home doing
somethings
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
same over again, you can go to the court, trying some new sports and thinking what is
the fit best to
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the best fit for
the fit best for
you.
Therefore
, you can know how's great
to do
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doing
a new thing every single
day
.
However
, some teenagers nowadays just doing
same things
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the same things
over and over again due to laziness and because of that, they may miss out their interests in their lives. They don't like to
change
and avoid in doing
somethings
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
new, due to that problem, they may become introvert people and anti social.
That is
why changing in doing
somethings
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some things
everyday
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every day
is so important nowadays. One person can become autism just because he or she doesn't like to
change
in doing
somethings
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some things
, he or she
just want
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just wants
to do same things over and over again. It will cost him or her a loss.
Nevertheless
, we need to consider that
change
in doing new things in the positive
ways but
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ways, but
not negative ways and it need to be healthy. In conclusions, doing
somethings
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
new and changing lifestyle every single
day
is so vital for every single one nowadays. It helps people know what are their reasons for staying a
life
and get
more positive impact
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a more positive impact
to one another.

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Word Count

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  • stability
  • routine
  • comfort
  • familiarity
  • fear
  • unknown
  • resistance
  • negative consequences
  • security
  • adaptability
  • growth
  • development
  • excitement
  • experiences
  • personal
  • professional
  • resilience
  • positive outcomes
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