Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the contemporary world, it is common belief that participate in
unpaid
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an unpaid community service program
community
service
program would be mandatory for greater out comes
in many aspects of humanity. something that results
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because, they do not want their children to go out and clean the city at their younger age, personally
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personality
childerens
to do free a young person of either sex
children
community
work for a soceity
. In the following essay, I will discuss an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
this
issue using some example to support my views and demonstrates points. However
, the unpaid community
service
should be compulsory to high
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should compulsory to high school programmes have
should be compulsory to high school programmes have
school
programmes have their own positive and negative sides and in following essay we will discuss them in detail.
First
of all, convincing argument can be that helping soceity
with unpaid an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
community
service
is a good initiate to have a brighter future. To begin
with, children should taught to collect a donation for physically disabled people without any personal profit. In other words
, if children learn to donate money
for a good cause at scholl
level, an educational institution
school
then
it would be good help for the people who are handicaped
; incapable of functioning as a consequence of injury or illness
handicapped
therefore
, the same message they convey to their parents or friends and so that they will do the same. The second
reason for my belief is that improving the neighbourhood. For instance
, children should taught
to clean their society by keeping the garbage in the Suggestion
should teach
grabage
bag, do not food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
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the garbage outside in propel through the air
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a public place
public places
as a result
there would be lesser disease and healtier
life that would be beneficial for them. improved in health or physical condition
healthier
Additionally
, teach sports to younger chlildren
is a good way to help each other who do not know how to play that any a young person of either sex
children
perticualr
devoted to a cause or party
partisan
parties
parts
sport
. the activity of providing for or maintaining by supplying with money or necessities
support
For example
, sometimes younger people feels hard to play some sports but
if they get a guidance from any other who is good at Accept comma addition
sports, but
this
, then
that would be helpful for them. If these scenarios have merit, then
conclusion
drawn in the original argument is significantly strengthened.
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the conclusion
conclusions
On the other hand
, some arguments can be made that teaching school
children to collect
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collect
money
for a donation would result harmful. The main reason for this
is if one children
collects more Suggestion
child
money
than other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
then
they might feel sad while other might make misuse of money
they collected. However
, closer examination would reveal that if the collection of money
by children is monitored by their parent or teacher then
there would be less or almost no chance of misuse of money
. Apart from this
, further
analysis would make it clear that collecting money
for a good cause is always good step
toward strong humanity.
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a good step
although
there are some benefits of not having compulsion
to unpaid Suggestion
a compulsion
the compulsion
community
service
at high school
programme, the advantages of having compulsion
to do unpaid Suggestion
a compulsion
the compulsion
community
work is surely outweigh
its disadvantage. Having considered all the arguments above, I would concede that teaching children at Suggestion
surely outweigh
school
level for helping others for free would always be a good habit.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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