Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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present time

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the present time

, people want to earn more

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money but

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money, but

many people claim that they should be entitled to save all the

money

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which are

earn

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earned

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from

them and they should not have to spend

money

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for paying

tax

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to the

government

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firstly

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Although

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people pay

tax

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to the

government

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government

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Government

are not providing

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is not providing

good facility

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good facilities

a good facility

to public so

this

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tax

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waste

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a waste

money

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people

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People

are not getting facilities so people think that they should not pay

tax

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to the

government

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, because of hard working, people do not prefer to pay

tax

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to the

government

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people want to earn more

money

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so they do lots of hard work and

government

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do not help to people related to financial problem. So without

government

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help

money

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are earned by people

such

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as farmer

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Businessman.

farmer

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Farmer

help

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every person through selling crop. In

farmar

a person who operates a farm

farmer

former

farmers

field risk factor is very high and the

government

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does not help

inside

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this

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risk.

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the other hand, if people do not pay

tax

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to the

government

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government

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The government

Government

cannot provide facilities

such

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as bast education, hospitals, transportation.

because

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Because

without

tex

charge against a citizen's person or property or activity for the support of government

tax

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text

government

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cannot anything for people for

this

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reason education level down so without education

country

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do not a competition in

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

country

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however

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However

, it is bad impact not only for

facility but

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the facility, but

the facility but

also

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for

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economy

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the economy

because

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Because

economy

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is depend

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depends

tex

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Tex

tax

text

. If people pay too much

tax

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government

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the government

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economy

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The economy

Economy

is increasing very well.

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for

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For

example, Canada and America the

economy

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this

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country

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is increasing day by day because people prefer to pay too much

tax

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to the

government

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. To sum up,

tax

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is important role

for

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every

country

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. In competition era, without

tax

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government

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cannot provide anything so people have to pay

tax

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government

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the government

can help not only poor people but

also

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some other people.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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305 words

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distribution of wealth
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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Your opinion

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