Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
At
present time
, people want to earn more Suggestion
the present time
money but
many people claim that they should be entitled to save all the Accept comma addition
money, but
money
which are earn
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earned
by
them and they should not have to spend Suggestion
from
money
for paying tax
to the government
.
To begin
firstly
, Although
people pay tax
to the government
. government
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Government
are not providing
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is not providing
good facility
to public so Suggestion
good facilities
a good facility
this
tax
is waste
of Suggestion
a waste
money
. people
are not getting facilities so people think that they should not pay Suggestion
People
tax
to the government
. Secondly
, because of hard working, people do not prefer to pay tax
to the government
people want to earn more money
so they do lots of hard work and government
do not help to people related to financial problem. So without government
help money
are earned by people such
as farmer ,
Businessman. Accept space
,
farmer
help Suggestion
Farmer
to
every person through selling crop. In Suggestion
of
farmar
field risk factor is very high and the a person who operates a farm
farmer
former
farmers
government
does not help inside
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in
this
risk.
on
the other hand, if people do not pay Suggestion
On
tax
to the government
. government
cannot provide facilities Suggestion
The government
Government
such
as bast education, hospitals, transportation. because
without Suggestion
Because
tex
, charge against a citizen's person or property or activity for the support of government
tax
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text
government
cannot anything for people for this
reason education level down so without education country
do not a competition in other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
country
. however
, it is bad impact not only for Suggestion
However
facility but
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the facility, but
the facility but
also
for economy
. Suggestion
the economy
because
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Because
economy
is depend
on Suggestion
depends
tex
. If people pay too much Suggestion
Tex
tax
text
tax
to government
. Suggestion
the government
economy
is increasing very well. Suggestion
The economy
Economy
for
example, Canada and America the Suggestion
For
economy
of this
country
is increasing day by day because people prefer to pay too much tax
to the government
.
To sum up, tax
is important role for
every Suggestion
in
country
. In competition era, without tax
, government
cannot provide anything so people have to pay tax
so government
can help not only poor people but Suggestion
the government
also
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