The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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As following up procedure "make sure to put all members of your family on the same page"! Advancement in technology opened doors to various methods of shopping. Shopping online has become one of the primary methods of purchasing goods and services. I totally disagree, with the author's point of view. Buying goods can only take up a few percentages of regular shopping methods, but will not lead to shutting down majority of shops in cities and towns. Raise in access to technology, has given consumers a chance to explore different shopping methods. Shopping online thought popular e-commerce websites became a trend among today's younger generation.

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, it has given consumers the benefit to search and purchase products easily.

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style of shopping has taken away the traditional look and feel for the

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consumers used to experience before purchasing it.

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, the survey conducted by a retail store shows that consumers prefer to demo products like home appliances, perfumes, and other expensive goods before consuming. Easiest way of owning the

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is to go to the nearest local store and purchase. Online shopping made

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delivery comfortable to your door steps, but the price for delivering, damage and return policies need to be paid by the consumer.

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, shopping at the nearest store will overcome any

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problem associated, giving consumer more flexibility to return the

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in short span of time and owning a new one.

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, online e-commerce giants are coming up with more and more e-shops in towns and cities to overcome

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barrier. In conclusion, online shopping has given the opportunity of finding products and owing them at user's comfort level. Replacing, the idea of the way user looks and feel for the

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cannot go away, on top of that the barrier associated with delivery and other policies of online shopping makes it hard for the closing of all shops in town and cities.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Music and other arts seem to be features of every society. In what ways are music and other arts important for societies and for individuals?

Some people believe that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the environment, others maintain that the major profit is the development of world business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.