Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays we are producing more and more
rubbish
.
This
is almost common in all countries. We are living in a century where we will get everything
in
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at
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our
finger tips
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fingertips
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.
By
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the influence of
advertisement
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advertisements
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,
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people
think that some
products
will help them in life and as a
resut
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result
they are tempted to buy more
products
which they really don’t need. Later
on
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after
few
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a few
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days when they realize that
this
product
will not help, they dump it. Even the unnecessary use of plastic increases
day
by
day
. Every
day
we are buying some types of plastic bags , bottles etc.
This
is a threat to
the
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society which will
result
in pollution. We are using and dumping other
rubbish
too.
This
will take our space as well
us
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as
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create health ,
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and enviormnetal
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enviormnetal
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environmental
problems
to
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for
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the
neigbours
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neighbours
also
. At the time of heavy
rain
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rain,
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this
rubbish
will go
the
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to the
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sea and
as a
result
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result,
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it will danger
life
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the life
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of sea creatures.
This
will
also
result
in spreading
deseases
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diseases
to humans as well. Human needs are endless.
Everyday
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we need to buy new things. If somebody is using a new
product
we are tempted to buy the same. An example we have a recently good electronic item in
home
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our home
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,
we
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and we
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seen
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a new brand of
same
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the same
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product
.
Then
we buy
this
product
which will
sometime
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sometimes
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result
in dumping the old items
as well as
rubbish
of the new items packing. We should always set a priority for what we need. Only buy
if
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apply
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something that really you want. We should try to use the things maximum
,.
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,
.
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Government
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The government
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should run informative classes or
advertisement
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advertisements
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to the
people
to understand the problems aroused
day
by
day
from
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by
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rubbish
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the rubbish
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we
produced
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.
Government
should ban certain
products
completely which causes environmental pollution. On my personal opinion
government
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the government
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should increase the tax amount for certain
products
which will help
people
to think
wether
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whether
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it is worth
to buy
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paying
this
much.
Government
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The government
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should have an action plan
how
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on how
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to destroy
this
rubbish
properly without harming
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the
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environment . Officials should fine the
people
those
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who are dumping
rubbish
in public areas which are not designated to do so. Let us hope in future we will produce less
rubbish
only.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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