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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities world. What are your opinion on this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is an irrefutable that the electronic games play a vital role in the child’s lifestyle and there is no doubt game helps the development of mind. Some people assert that violent games effect badly on teenagers, because of
this
 criminal activity increase. In my opinion, games e
ffect
have an effect upon
affect
p
erson
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person's
mind, but up-to some extent. In
this
 essay, i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
intend to support my views before the conclusion can be drawn. There are several reasons why folks interested in violent games. The age of 7 to 8 are under the developing mentality in that group of children constantly learn new things whatever going in their surroundings.
Firstly
, now a day, teens want something extraordinary graphic games, thrills and actions in a virtual gaming system. It is a fact that gaming company always tries to make a
ctions
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action
games
such
 as grand theft auto, call of duty and so many. For an instance, according to the surveys in 2018, 80 percent visual games are based on fightings.
On the contrary
 side, people feel that
this
 kind of games badly effect on the world which causes crimes. In my prospective, there are lots of thing which results violence,
such
 as television and vulnerable songs, not only games are responsible for
this
.
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
We should keep t
racking
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track
o
n
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of
our children and gives valuable lesson
instead
 of blaming gaming console.
Moreover
, the parents should take a monthly report of their baby from school and meet with teachers. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that growing c
riminality
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crimes
crime
in the world is the world is a major concern, but we could not raise our finger on virtual console, it is just for enjoyment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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