You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Governer sir, My name is Vishwa I'am your
3rd year
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university student and
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want to raise a problem
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the new
restaurant
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which is opened in
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university campus is creating a huge noise till
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midnight, the sound system they fixed inside is
more noisy
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and they keeping the high volume.
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month we have an annual exam we cannot concentrate on our
study
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due to
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music system in the
restaurant
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and all the students are facing the same problem and
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the final year students are more worried about it, for everyone it is hard to sit out and study. Several times we advised
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the
restaurant
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owner to reduce the sound, but he never listened to us and he is not taking it in a serious manner, now we do not have any option
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your interference in
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matter we kindly inform you to take
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proper action on
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matter, either you could change the
restaurant
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contract to another person or you can inform the present owner to do not keep the music till midnight with high volume. I believe the above problem will be solved as soon as possible.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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