Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Motor car accidents are one of the major causes of adolescent deaths. To curb

such

crashes, the authorities should license adults above 23 years to

drive

motorbikes. In my opinion, I completely agree with the aforementioned vies as those older than 23 years are more matured minded and more enlightened and can be held responsible for their actions.

Firstly

, a good reason why leaders should

permit only people

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only permit people

over 23 to

drive

motorcycle is that they are more matured in mind.

This

is to say that adults of that

age

will make

better

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the best

decision whether or not to take a risk on the

road

while driving. To illustrate, as a

youngster I

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youngster, I

thought that outrunning any vehicle on the

road

was a show of bravery.

Hence

, I overtook dangerously on the

highway which

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highway, which

would have resulted in a very fatal accident.

This

is why only adults of

matured

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mature

minds should be allowed to ride bikes. Another point to consider is that older people are more enlightened and aware of possible causes of

bike accident

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bike accidents

a bike accident

.

In other

words they

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words, they

are knowledgeable of certain dangerous

road

practices

such

as, exceeding

speed limit

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the speed limit

, performing certain stunts on the

high way

a major road for any form of motor transport

highway

and operating mobile phones, which can result to accident of even death.

Thus

, they will avoid

such

practices while driving.

Finally

, people older than 23 can be held responsible for their actions by the government and should be licensed to

drive

motor cycles

a motor vehicle with two wheels and a strong frame

motorcycles

.

This

is because, they are aware of the rules and regulations of the highway and have attained the legal jail punishable

age

;

hence

, they would be more careful when driving bikes. To exemplify, the Guardian newspaper in 2017, that above 70% of careful

road

users are adults above the

age

of 23. In summary, I believe that authorities that want to prevent

road

accidents associated with juvenile delinquency should only permit adults above 23 to

drive

motor cycles

a motor vehicle with two wheels and a strong frame

motorcycles

as they are more

matured

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mature

in mind, aware of the possible causes of accidents, and are of the

age

of being held responsible for their action.