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You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Afrin Ali. I am writing to enquire about my stay for 2 months of my training course in Vietnam.
Firstly
, I would like to share that I have enrolled in the SA HR course at Oxford University which starts from the 1st October to November 30, 2019.
Hence
, I am arriving one week before my training, that's on 25th
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September
.
Secondly
, I would
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 to live in
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aying
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paying
dying
 guest house because I could get a chance to meet new
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people
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 as I am new to
this
 city.
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, the
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accommodation
 should be somewhere central to the town and if
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possible
 to be near the
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shopping
 centres or
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supermarket
supermarkets
 to
urchase
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purchase
 some basic items. I would be really grateful if you could
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provide
 me the details of the mode of
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transport
 which I can use regularly travel to my college?. In
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 it could be either sharing any
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private
 cabs or
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public
 buses. I look to forward to hearing your
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response
 Yours faithfully, Afrin

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