IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: • suggest someone who deserves the reward • mention what they have done to help the community • say what reward you would like to give this person

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Dear Sir/ Madam, My
name
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Tibin
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Tobin
 Peter. I read the news
in
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 your supplementary page, regarding
about
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apply
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the reward for
community
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 support
people
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.
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this
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occasion
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 I am suggesting our parish priest
name
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 for it. His
name
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 is Fr. Chris Rob and currently he is the vicar in St. Mary’s Cathedral Church, Melbourne. Fr. Chris is doing a
lot
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 charity work for the parish
Community
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. For the
last
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 2
years
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 he is making
a
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apply
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fundraise
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 for helping poor
people
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 in India. He collects the money from parish
people
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 and church visitors. He made a charity clothing bin near the church and request
people
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 to donate some used
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clothes
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cloths
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clothes
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 for the poor
people
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. Once
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a year he visits India and
stay
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 with
poor
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the poor
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community
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. As a
reward
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 if you give some valuable money,
then
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 he would use that for the same charity support.
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, if you mention his
name
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on
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 the newspaper regarding his
community
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 work, would be a great appreciation for him. Thank you for your attention. Regards,
Tibin
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Tobin
Tabin
 Peter

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