The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

You should spend about 40 minutes on
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task. Write about the following topic: The increase in mobile
phone
use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile
phones
can
also
be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile
phones
? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. Type in words from the text and click on 'Guess' or press ENTER. (Score +1 per correct word) Click on any gap to see the word. (Score -1 per word) You may want to see the text before you start. (Score -10 to see the text) Benefits and disadvantages of mobile
phones
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mobile
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the communication between
people
and their
business
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businesses
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. Nowadays
people
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mobile
phone
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not only for
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phone
calls. One of the main advantages
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mobile
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is social networking is much faster and easier.
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like taking photographs, banking, gaming, travelling
purpose
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etc. There is some disadvantage
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using mobile
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. Emitting radiation from mobile
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makes
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critical medical and health
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problems
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for human
being
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beings
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. Some of the medical research
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that these radiations cause several kinds of cancer in
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body
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chance to affect
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to human reproduction system. Another main concern about the mobile is to distract the personal relationship. In
present
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day
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people
do not want to spend time with family, and they always keep scrolling
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mobile
phones
. Some
people
are looking for new unhealthy relationships and it
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negative
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impact
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trusted
relation
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. Children spend more time
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phones
rather than studying cause
bad
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a bad
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impact on their education carer. Mobile
phones
are strictly prohibited
while
driving because
it
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causes
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accidents on the roads. In film
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and cinemas
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users to switch their
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phones
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to off or silent.
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mobile
phones
have some drawbacks but it gives huge
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for human's
day
to
day
life. So,
people
use it for the good aspect rather than wasting their time and it
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great advantage
on
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their life.
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