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The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries, others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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According to the recent research conducted around the globe, the data which were received confirmed that numbers of older people have been raised as compared to the younger ones.
That is
 why some people argue that it will create an inappropriate effect on their country plus increase problems. Perhaps,
on the other hand
, some still believe that they are still really important for the society. Based on the survey's many of the organisations are now disowning the old professionals as they consider them as a traditional mind-set
employees
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employee
 with less efficient abilities of creative thinking and up to date ideas.
Furthermore
, aged people are not able to
activily
in an active manner
actively
 participate in social working programs.
Therefore
, many of us tend to believe that they are
least essential
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less essential
 for the society, as young generation can be really helpful in managing all
type
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types
 of social activities.
However
, on the other side some people still consider
this
 group to be a crucial part of the society,
moreover
, any country of even
a
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an
 organisation would be
indespensable
not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
 without
this
 group. Whether, it any company or a state, the necessary need for the experienced professionals will always be required for the training of young talent. No matter, how less efficient the aged people are their requirements will always be
their
in or at that place
there
, as they are the ones who are aware of all the dynamics of any place.
For instance
, young talent will always be remarkable at generating ideas, but the old one knows how to critically implement it at the proper time. In my honest opinion, utilising every age group at their suitable place can never let any type of problem to be
raise
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raised
. Experience is always praised as young talent is welcome anytime, occupying them at
right place
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the right place
 at the correct time can be effective around the globe.
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